MISCELLANEOUS MUDDY WRITING ITEMS
If your writing seems muddy, or wishy-washy the following items might be the problem.
1) Avoid Unneeded Qualifiers
Maybe, possibly,
might, seems, very
(Unless your intent is to make your character look wishy-washy)
- Choose strong words and statements
Be careful - some words don't need any qualifier:
Pregnant is pregnant; absolue is absolute; unique is unique; fatal is fatal
2) Eliminate Redundancies
Two words often sneak in where one is enough. Watch for them.
- two eyes
- stood up or sat down
- sky above or earth below
- ceiling overhead or floor underfoot
- end result
- Choose strong words and statements
Be careful - some words don't need any qualifier:
Pregnant is pregnant; absolue is absolute; unique is unique; fatal is fatal
2) Eliminate Redundancies
Two words often sneak in where one is enough. Watch for them.
- two eyes
- stood up or sat down
- sky above or earth below
- ceiling overhead or floor underfoot
- end result
oops - I might be guilty of a few of these sometime. The sky above was reflected in the water below, a vivid blue.... ? So a sentence like that would be wrong?
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