Sunday, November 17, 2019

NaNoWriMo - How to write fast





What helped, what went sideways, and what I learned that I can use every day.


 1 - What helped.

1)   Warm-up – I had written four hours a day for the six weeks prior to November 1. Although it was non-fiction I was writing, the habit of sitting down in the morning and again after lunch served me well during NaNo.

2)   I do not have an out-of-the-house job – a major bonus.

3)   As I stated in my thoughts after day 1, I had characters and a rough plan when I started page 1.

4)   I have finally killed off my Miss Purdy (critic) and was able to write fluently without worry about it was good, bad, or even useful. I simply focused and wrote.

5)   Being a fast typist probably helped as well. Plus, this is my sixth book. I’ve been here before.

6)   Knowing my buddies were rooting for me gave me courage.


2 - What went sideways.

1)   My title was Uncle Lem Fakes a Wife. First off, Sam Logan butted in and took over the narrative.

2)   Secondly Uncle Lem did not cooperate. He kept hiding from me. He does appear as a secondary character in the first four books in the series. Apparently, he doesn’t want his own book.

3)   In the end, Mary Morrison (who was to be the fake wife) stepped into the lead role. After that, things went more smoothly.

4)   My killer didn’t like her character sketch and operated in ways that didn’t fit it.

5)   If my crooked fingers type wrong, the program underlines and I can fix. Don’t look. Just type.


3 - My take-way from all this.

1)   Habits are essential for high production. Write every day to keep in ‘writing shape’.

2)   Be brave and if needed shift protagonists (or anything else) mid-stream BUT KEEP GOING.

3)   Writing without a resident critic is so much more fun. Need to keep her locked up.

4)   If not sure what to type in the beginning each day, read the previous two or three paragraphs, type AND THEN and write down whatever comes to mind.

5)   Let the characters act how they want and change the character sketches later to back up their behavior.

6)   Planning is good, (I always plan) but sometimes pants-tering is just as good and occasionally more enlightening. DO BOTH.

7)   Once I have my Draft Zero written, my boys in the basement start to feed me what I need to alter, add, and delete to make a decent next Draft.


Will I do NaNoWriMo again?

 I’ll see.
 But I know that I can write a useable draft in fifteen days if I want to.

That knowledge alone was worth the effort.  
My question in Week 2: Can I keep the pace?



Damn right I can.


My advice to you if you want to give it a try.

GO FOR IT – YOU’VE GOT THIS!

 

 

Sunday, November 3, 2019

NaNoWriMo Who is the Point of View Character?




Help. My POV is all over the map.

'Point of View' is a critical element of keeping your story tight, relevant and readable. 

Your POV character is the heart of your story. We want our readers to identify with our POV character. Right?

My story is progressing well. I’m at 9493 words at the end of Day2. I’m up at 7am and ready to get writing.

 Sounds good. But my thinker is telling me there is a problem.

The problem on Day 3. 

So far, my story has evolved with three main points of view and three secondary ones. The story isn’t about the character I’d thought would be my protagonist. Uncle Lem (the original protagonist) isn't getting a word in edge-ways.

It’s not that I’m writing in omniscient POV. It’s that the characters keep showing up, sitting in a chair in front of me, and telling the story as they see it. 

 It’s like a police parade of interviewing witnesses.


I know that this first draft is simply telling the story to myself. And that much will need ‘fixing’ when I’m finished this and get to draft #2.


But this parade of people is crazy. Or is it? 


The solution.

The good part is that each character has great information and all I have to do is record it.


 Maybe my brain is revealing a new way for me to write a first draft. 


What will happen if I work with it as it is? What if I do let each character tell me what they think is going on? After all, this first draft is not carved in stone.


First drafts are meant to be fluid, malleable, and re-written. It’s important to remember that. 

My decision. 
 
I need to go with the flow and let the characters and story come out no matter what.


 This is not the time to get all ‘author-y’ and try to pound the story into the mold I originally had in mind.


However, if things continue the way they started, I’m going to need a new title. Uncle Lem Fakes a Wife is not going to work if Uncle Lem isn’t even in the bloody book.

Okay folks, I am going with the solution. I’m off to interview my cast of characters.
Happy writing, fellow NaNo-ers.